Why do my poems be
like water rushing
in a rapid
I seem to love four
four letters in a row
four lines in a tow
Why do my poems be
like joyful bursts
of sporadic laughter
short sweet fragrant after
as if they need
reader till writer greets
Why do my poems be
like dreamy sunrise
on mountain summit
I seem to have taken
the road hither
nobody seldom goes thither
Why do my poems be
like hazy reflections
upon silent sea
roaring rolling beneath before
perhaps the one sought
perhaps the one aft
Congratulations! You have accomplished the feat of making words as mysterious as some of the 20th Century Poets!
ReplyDelete:grin: Long long way to tread still!
DeleteDoes anyone know if it would be better, or indeed more conforming to the norms, to include punctuation in poems like the above?
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